What do you think of my *story*? help?

ooooo really liked it!! I just knew something bad was going to happen and it was amazing (well not the fact that he feel the details though were great) but i couldn't imagine where they were i know in a tree but where in a forest a meadowr mountins i need more of that! But the rest fantastic!!!!!! Please please please can i hear more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!…